Legitimately good, thoroughly enjoyed. There are a decent amount of typos, though. At first, I had thought it was to simulate everyday typos people make when texting, but I felt uncertain by the end. One thing, at the very least, is that there's a very big difference between sweaty and sweety. Having her call the MC sweaty over and over...I knew what the aim was, but I couldn't help but laugh every time. Also, is tummy supposed to be a code word after a while?
Thanks so much! 😊 I'm really glad you enjoyed it! And haha, I see what you mean about the typos—actually, I include some of them on purpose to make the conversations feel more natural and realistic, just like real-life texting. I love adding small details like this to enhance the simulation and roleplay experience. But I totally get that some might stand out a bit too much, so I'll fine-tune them in the next update. As for 'tummy'... well, let’s just say it wasn’t meant to be a code word, but now you’ve got me thinking! 😂 Thanks again for your feedback—it really helps me improve!
I'd figured some of them were intentional, as that's just how people type or text, so I don't think they should all be removed.
For me, Tummy was fine for the first couple of times, but after that, the use of the word didn't make sense contextually until I started treating it as a code word.
You're quite welcome. Happy to give feedback. Also happy to be a proofreader if you need one at any point.
Thanks for asking! 😊 For now, the only social media I have is X (@rspstudio21), but it's still pretty new and not very active yet. I'm focusing on improving the game first, but I'll try to be more active there soon!
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Legitimately good, thoroughly enjoyed. There are a decent amount of typos, though. At first, I had thought it was to simulate everyday typos people make when texting, but I felt uncertain by the end. One thing, at the very least, is that there's a very big difference between sweaty and sweety. Having her call the MC sweaty over and over...I knew what the aim was, but I couldn't help but laugh every time. Also, is tummy supposed to be a code word after a while?
Thanks so much! 😊 I'm really glad you enjoyed it! And haha, I see what you mean about the typos—actually, I include some of them on purpose to make the conversations feel more natural and realistic, just like real-life texting. I love adding small details like this to enhance the simulation and roleplay experience. But I totally get that some might stand out a bit too much, so I'll fine-tune them in the next update. As for 'tummy'... well, let’s just say it wasn’t meant to be a code word, but now you’ve got me thinking! 😂 Thanks again for your feedback—it really helps me improve!
I'd figured some of them were intentional, as that's just how people type or text, so I don't think they should all be removed.
For me, Tummy was fine for the first couple of times, but after that, the use of the word didn't make sense contextually until I started treating it as a code word.
You're quite welcome. Happy to give feedback. Also happy to be a proofreader if you need one at any point.
Incredible stuff keep it up, looking forward for more!!!
ty <3 , I appreciate you support , next chapters coming as soon as possible
Yw!!, hope to start supporting on Patreon soon too, btw is there any social media I can follow the project?
Thanks for asking! 😊 For now, the only social media I have is X (@rspstudio21), but it's still pretty new and not very active yet. I'm focusing on improving the game first, but I'll try to be more active there soon!